I did this thingy: [link]
The character is him ---> [link]
My Results:
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James isn't a character: he's you, or you as you'd like to be. He is so impossibly hip that he has difficulty seeing over his own pelvis; he'll probably die young, but damn, will it have been a good life. He always knew he was special, destined for great things - and probablyf made sure everyone else knew it too. He's got no emotional scars to speak of. And you, his creator, have spoilt him rotten and given him everything he wanted.

You identify far too heavily with James, and defend him from all sides, never realizing that in your quest to make him perfect you are alienating your readers. Back off and take a break. Try writing the story from the viewpoint of a different character, one you have less sympathy with... or writing a different story and coming back to this one.
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Zomg James dosnt Die young!He dosnt know he's great :/ He didnt even know he had powers till one of his old friend name Inako told him about there powers.He got nothing going on in his past because it's been erased.He dosnt have everything he wants!...he got no Xbox360.Well James is a anime/VG fan lost in another world with his 3 others friends.

PG [link] Results
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Sorano is nothing like you. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to. She always knew she was special, destined for great things - and probablyf made sure everyone else knew it too. She's got no emotional scars to speak of. And you've been pretty kind to her, always ready to intercede on her behalf and give her a nice easy victory.

You may have let yourself get a little too close to Sorano. Maybe she's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like her and are trying to give her a free ride. Have some confidence in your writing! Sorano is a good character. Give her room to be herself before you stifle her.
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I really dont show her as herself...Im being kind to her?She dosnt know her parents,been training like hell when she was little,Killed alot of ppl for missions,She gets the crap betten out of her,has been sad that how here life was...yeah im being really nice to her.

Kenshi Result
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Kenshi is only a little like you. He is so impossibly hip that he has difficulty seeing over his own pelvis; he'll probably die young, but damn, will it have been a good life. He always knew he was special, destined for great things - and probablyf made sure everyone else knew it too. He's got no emotional scars to speak of. And you've been pretty kind to him, always ready to intercede on his behalf and give him a nice easy victory.

You may have let yourself get a little too close to Kenshi. Maybe he's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like him and are trying to give him a free ride. Have some confidence in your writing! Kenshi is a good character. Give him room to be himself before you stifle him.